Post by wren on Jul 17, 2009 18:07:21 GMT -6
Name --[/size]Veildpaw
Age --Six moons
Gender --she-cat
Alliance --Mysteryclan
Rank --Apprentice
Outer Beauty --EYES: Veildpaw has eerie stormy orbs. Her eyes color isn’t what makes it special. Though they are a unusual gray it’s how strong the color is that makes you look twice. Their color begins with a dark rain-cloud rim that bands all the way around. Then the color seeps inward, lightening as it goes. By the time it reaches her iris it looks translucent but you can still see a soft covering of gray there. She has a stunning gaze that captures even the harshest in there young glow.
FUR: Frosty white fur smothers all color on Veildpaw’s pelt. Her pelts not the gentile white of cream or shells. Its harsh but has no trace of silver in any of its bleached fibers. Though it is such a strong unmarked white, it only makes Veildpaw more beautiful as she graces the land with her step. She enjoys keeping her coat clean though her paws often end up brown by the end of a days training. Her pelt consist of only short dense fur. Despite its measly length Veildpaw has no problem in the winter and finds herself presently cool in the summer.
WEIGHT: She’s still a young little girl and because of this and the fact she hasn’t started training, is only 5 and a half pounds. When she reaches warrior age though, it can be expected of her to be closer to 10 pounds with her larger size and warrior skils.
BUILD: like all young cats Veildedpaw moves on narrow sholders and hips. She has no real defining bone structure yet. Clearly when she’s older she won’t be a cat with a broad gate or very muscular shoulders. It could be said she resembles a slight Fleetclan cat because she lacks the muscle yet of a Rushclan cat. When she grows older its likely her shoulders will thicken up to form what looks more like a cat of the river then of the marsh. Veildpaw’s in no hurry to define herself though. Her slender from makes her graceful and a skilled apprentice when it comes to weaving threw roots in search of mice.
MARKS/SCARS: Veildpaw has none of these yet. She has lived a sheltered life in her clan and has never really gotten hurt or for that matter severely scraped.
OTHER: Veildpaw has a few features that make her cute. She has a soft pink nose that forms a mix between a triangle and a heart. This is the only other color on her entire body other then her eyes.
FULL DESCRIPTION: Veildpaw is a lovely young she cat. White fur graces her entire frame. It is smooth making her look like a living layer of fog with every fur being about the same length. Each dense fiber remains soft like a kits but is the perfect protection in any weather. Her white bodies only relief comes from her stormy eyes and pink nose. Perhaps second to her stark color noticeably is her build. After all you can’t observe her pelt with out looking at that. She has narrow shoulders and hips ambling down to her average length legs and normal paws. From her back her sweeping tail is also average length while her ears appear to be slightly more triangular then most cats. She has drooping white whiskers that collect dew and snow easily.
Inner Beauty --
GENERAL PERSONALITY: Veildpaw has a heart of gold. One of the first things cats notice about her is her spirited personality and her willingness to help out. She has a good thinking mind despite the fact it’s often used to create trouble. There’s not a honest mean bone in her body. She’s a positive creature and looks at live as generally filled with good things. She also has incisive curiosity and enjoys poking her nose into whatever she can. She’s a small amount a sneak and devotes good amount of time listening in on older cats conversations as she pretends to struggle with a root. Her down side is that her curiosity drives her to ignore the basic rules of the forest. Veildpaw wouldn’t think twice about stepping over the boundary to check something out.
LIKES: Veildpaw loves exploring and spending her energy doing new things.
DISLIKES: She hates no knowing things and when she gets caught eavesdropping
STRENGTHS:
This little cat had boundless amounts of energy she uses to do all kinds of things with.
She gets along well with nearly every cat in her clan and with cats in other clans. It’s easy for Veildpaw to make friends and form relationships.
Curiosity has gotten everyone but Veildpaw so far. Somehow she’s managed to turn over every rock and not find trouble, this traits can lead to be a downside though.
Quick wit is perhaps what saves Veildpaw when she gets caught doing something she knows she shouldn’t she’s a little bit a con but generally this trait is used to better her clan.
WEAKNESSES:
She doesn’t know how two mates should act together. She only knows her older mom who turned out to be mostly a indoors part of her life. Her dad was gone before she was born so she doesn’t know how a pair usually acts together especially when it comes to the kit situation.
She gets this itch to do what she wants to even if it means breaking the rules. Veildpaw tries to ignore it but with her newfound apprentice freedom it may be hard to ignore and more opportunities open up.
She doesn’t know much about family ties. Though her mother was there for her entire life so far Veildpaw was born with out sibling rivalry or conflict.
Veildpaw has never been in a real fight. She has also never considered fighting for her clan or providing food. She seems to be of the impression this will go easy for her.
GOALS: Secretly, Veildpaw wants to visit every clans territory and to in the lands beyond the clans.
Past --
NEW BORN: Veildkit was born in the middle of winter to a amber eyed white queen named Fogdust. She entered Mysteryclan a single siblingless kit to only her mother. Her father as it turned out died the moon before of old age and susceptibility. Her mother was also old and tired, the paid hadn’t had any intentions of ever having children but here the namless Veildkit was. As it went exhausted Fogdust collapsed next to her kitten for a near two day off and on sleep, many cats thought she would die. But this resilient queen came around and opened her eyes on the second day to a white wash of snow. She got up to track down her daughter who another queen had taken to suckle. The queen lay closer to the entrance and as Fogdust reclaimed her newborn she noticed how her child seeped to disappear when held up to the backdrop of snow. Old Fogdust smiled, a beautiful name already taking it’s place in her heart.
KIT: Veildkit was the opposite of her mother. She constantly bubbled with energy and drove the camp crazy with her mischief. It was middle spring by the time she got free of the nursery and Veildkit lived up every moment of it. One of her earliest ideas was sneaking into the apprentices dens. Of course the older cats caught her but none were angry. Veildkit proved to be intelligent with a heart of gold. Some of the roughest cats couldn’t help but take to her. But the little kitten couldn’t stop with the apprentices den. She was on to bigger and better things and managed to slip into the warriors quarters and out with out being noticed. She tried the medicine cats den to but it was no fun because when the medicine cat left there really was no one there. So she decided her biggest attempt of all would be the leaders den.One star smeared night Veildkit slunk over to the leaders den and crept inside. She watched as the older cat mumbled in his sleep then curled up on the floor and passed out herself.
The next morning the big boss found her and like everyone else had a amused glimmer in shining in those eyes as the light reprimand was given out.
Other then her persistent attack on camp peace Veildkit matured normally. She grew bigger and stronger, soon getting to eat her first meat and dreaming of the day she’d catch her own mouse and go to the moon high ceremony. She desperately wanted her apprentice and warrior name, if only to be free of the dark milky smelling dens she currently called home. Despite what some cats expected Veildkit never tried to escape camp. For awhile some even thought she was destine to be a medicine cat. For all the ruckus Veildkit loved helping out though, she avoided the elders like green cough, and turned out to be good work in thickening nursery walls and playing with younger kits. But Veildkits time was up.
APRENTISHIP: Yes! Veildpaw jumped for joy as he new name echoed through her bones. She was no longer little Veildkit of the nurcery but Veildpaw of the great out doors! Her eyes narrowed as she watched all the cheering cats, wishing one had been picked as her mentor. For now her leader admitted she’d be an apprentice in waiting. But as soon as someone was ready Veildpaw would be in. She was ok with this despite the unusualness, now she had all the freedom she’d ever get as an apprentice. Veildpaw wiggled and laughed, she couldn’t wait to start training.
Kin --Mother -- Fogdust
(Now a new elder)
Father -- Rippedpelt
(Deseaced in winter)
Mentor -- Evefrost
(New mentor to Veildpaw)
Did you read the rules?
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