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Post by whitepaw on Aug 1, 2009 23:50:22 GMT -6
Name:
Leafkit Leafpaw Leaffall (when the time is right)
Age: 1o moons
Gender: She-cat
Alliance: Rushclan
Rank: Medicine cat apprentice
Outer Beauty:
Inner Beauty:
Past:
Kin: Mother-Gracetalk [dead] Father-Tanright [dead] brother-Peacepaw [dead]
IC Sample:
Did you read the rules? *edited out*
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Post by Haunt on Aug 6, 2009 19:48:51 GMT -6
I'm sorry but Waterlily's bio has won the audition. Thanks for trying though! ^^ Your bio meets the bare minimum of the requirements, which is really more thought of as kit bio worthy. So could you try to beef it up a bit as you modify it; if you choose to do so? It would also be nice if you separated your paragraphs, just so it's easier to notice. Needy me also hopes that you could learn to push yourself a bit more for the rp examples. Other than that you are good to go!
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